The Thing About You, Mama

If it wasn’t for you,
I’d still be floating in the darkness of your womb.
I’d still be crawling, blocking people’s way.
I’d still be standing still, not moving forward.
I’d still be walking the same path I know.
I’d still be running away from my problems.
I’d still be driving recklessly, crashing everyone I see.

If it wasn’t for you,
I wouldn’t know how to see, what’s right or wrong.
I wouldn’t know how to speak, and touch other’s life.
I wouldn’t know how to listen, and be self centered.
I wouldn’t know how to think, and be an eye sore.

If I was never your son,
I’m sure you’d be happy, not to have a troubled son like me.
I’m sure I’d be stuck on the 2nd line of this post.
I’m sure my room is a lot messier.
I’m sure your cooking is awful.
I’m sure I’d fall for you.

If it wasn’t for you,
I wouldn’t know what it feels like to be loved.

Thank you Ma, for EVERY single thing you have done for me. I assure you, I will not go to waste.

ps: 11th May, Mothers day! Have you wished your mom?

pss: a box of chocolate = RM 12, a dozen roses = RM 100, a gold ring = RM 1550, a poem + cheapskate son = priceless.

Note to Ma : of course on your card, I wrote you a different poem!


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This Post Has 26 Comments

  1. :up: Its a very nice poem! I like the way u wrote it.. πŸ™‚
    I hope I could write a good poem like u too.. πŸ™„ Sadly, I’m not good in expressing my feeling. That why I’m blogging.. to sort out my thought.. but sometimes, my writing still didn’t reflect what I want to say exactly.. πŸ™

    yeah2..Happy Mothers’ Day! πŸ˜€

    saffa’s last blog post..Searching For The Silver Lining

  2. Yeap2x! 11th May.. hari Ahad minggu kedua.. not Sabtu.. my bad.. πŸ™‚

    Happy mother’s day to ur mother!~

    ps: beautiful entry.

    sindarellalalala’s last blog post..~@Demi Masa-Hargai Ibumu@~

  3. happy mother’s day to all mums in the world hoyeah πŸ˜€

    eddie sangat pandai menulis. :up: :up: (i bagi dua ok)

    AyUmi’s last blog post..:: workstation tag ::

  4. luv the poem, sgt wonderful ok! πŸ™‚

  5. πŸ™‚ i wrote one for my mum in her card. die gelak! guess its not so lyrical kot.

    laila’s last blog post..and this one goes to

  6. mama-mia!!

  7. at least you wished her πŸ™‚

  8. hep.. hep.. sungguh demanding la kamu ni eddie. 2 daripada 3 kira ok la tu.. πŸ˜€

    AyUmi’s last blog post..:: workstation tag ::

  9. Ummi,precious gift from God….sadly,she left so in peace ummi πŸ˜₯

  10. dude…mak aku tanye nape kau lama tak dtg umah aku… πŸ™„
    hahaha…aku ckp ko bz… πŸ˜†
    nway, happy mother’s day to all moms out there and for those soon to be one..cheers ➑

    iqhbal naeem’s last blog post..jerry and composure : appeal

  11. “I’m sure I’d fall for you.” == sy suka part ini! Nice! :up:

  12. yeah man, dont waste yourself. live life to the max. Did you really gave your mother those things? πŸ˜€

  13. aku ni kira anak mak ko jugak ke?

  14. she’s hot for a 50 year old πŸ˜‰

  15. I dont think you understood what I wrote. Read again ❗

  16. Really? Hmm about her son? πŸ˜‰

  17. her son became the Wicked Malaysian Mind πŸ˜›

  18. Opps, Sori dude.. I misread the thread.

  19. Hahahah.. alhamdulillah jadi jugak org ye.. she must be proud of you.

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