• NH and friends NoktahHitam is my alter ego. I am a nocturnal Web Developer at Laman7. Part time innovator, full time procrastinator.

  • “Before God we are all equally wise - and equally foolish.”- Albert Einstein

I Miss You Jenny

Here we are, caught in this thunderous rain.
Rubbing each other, hoping it’ll ease the pain.

Drizzles cloud my sight, fondly she wiped.
Never will she miss, any single drop.

Bluntly we stared, sparingly asking of trust,
Silently we nodded and wrapped another.

Gently I squeezed, softly she grunts.
I wanted more, she suddenly roared.

“Slurrp” she sucked me in, I clutched her skin.
Don’t stop now, please blow me off.

Adrenaline racing, my toes entangled yours,
Away we head, to a lost less paradise.

Deeds or sins, good or bad, we never cared.
She said stop! I grew upset. We ran out of gas.

Yes, Jenny is my car. And you pervert thought I’d write a love making poem?

ps: Initially spelled Geni, but tak commercial la babe, hence Jenny.

pss: If you’ve been fooled, please Fave me!

psss: This was initially an essay, I guess I got caught up with poem. Whom to blame?

pssss: It’s about me stuck in traffic jam. Once I hit the open road, I jammed the pedal. I have my car and skills to trust on this slippery road.

Where to put this one??
I miss her.
Her cynic stare, piercing through anything she laid her eyes on.
Her deep sweet voice, slightly off pitched but enough to send me afloat.
Her pure innocent smile, as if begging me to ravage her.
Her carefree attitude, nothing can bring her down.
Most importantly, I miss the way she handles me.

 

There are 43 Comments for “I Miss You Jenny”

wth?
miahahahahaha
speechless
you go bro!

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sootsprite wrote on October 21, 2008 #1

You did mentionkan yang kamu pakai Jenny utk redah banjir.After that she got tarik pasal rosak..

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NoktahHitam replied #1

yes I did, on my previous blog.

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Mack wrote on October 22, 2008 #2

ok la..aku kena tipu…aku ingatkan ni response kepada SEO gaya PE…ruper nyer aku salah…faved it already…

sengal plak aku tgk balik gambar aku amik ari tuh… xCukup banyak ruper nyer..CCCissss btol la..

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NoktahHitam replied #1

tertipu mesti kene fave it! care pancing best

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|1f34|-|1r3 wrote on October 22, 2008 #3

wakakakka… keta rupanya… hehehhehehehe :lol:

Bro… esok tengah hari atau awal skit dari tu ada something special kat blog saya… we want to try something for a change.. it would be very nice of you if you can take part and give you support… sincerity is the keyword..

Adry @ http://www.adrysabry.com

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NoktahHitam replied #1

definitely! Bloggers to change the world!

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adry wrote on October 22, 2008 #4

owh!good one.you caught me.kering² kene tipu :razz:

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M-I-N wrote on October 22, 2008 #5

oh,yes! you’ve got me. i’ve been fooled by the title. demn. hahahaha.

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NoktahHitam replied #1

sile Fave Me ok.

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nono replied #1

apa yang best nya fave ih? sorry.. serious tak tahu.. :P

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NoktahHitam replied #1

people vote for your writing, and you gain a lot more traffic from different grounds. :lol:


!x0r@ wrote on October 22, 2008 #6

lame, another pathetic way to urge ppl read it. Ding dong!

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mlle linie replied #1

its either u r lame for being cheated or u r just plain lame. i dont see anything lame abt this post. idiot.

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mlle linie replied #1

ed, sorry for the “kurang sopanness”..

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NoktahHitam replied #1

You are free to slap any bitch you like, itu your own discretion.

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NoktahHitam replied #1

Oh wel.. being overly popular has it’s weakness, haters :cry:

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JUKI wrote on October 22, 2008 #7

Hi NH, been silently reading your blog (as usual). Very surprised to see my name as the title post although I knew you weren’t talking about me ;-) Keep well. jenny

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jenny wrote on October 22, 2008 #8

i read dr bawah ke atas haha
then reread.. bunyi nye sgt wrong!! LOL

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NoktahHitam replied #1

main tipu! :arrow:

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Adila replied #1

haha kena tau ending dulu baru baca dari awal :P

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Adila wrote on October 22, 2008 #9

aku baca dari bawah ke atas.
pastu baru aku baca balik.

hoho.

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NoktahHitam replied #1

same cam adila, main tipu.

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Adila replied #1

yesss!! hi^5!! haha :grin:

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cik simpankira wrote on October 22, 2008 #10

eh, tak perasan pulak Adila pun sama. Macam membahasa melayukan aje komen aku ni.

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Adila replied #1

hahahah xpe2
sehati sejiwa cam tu la
komen yg same~

ngeee~ :P

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cik simpankira wrote on October 22, 2008 #11

haha.. aku dah agak.. mesti tricky poem nye la.. first2 ingat citer pasal kucing.. then.. citer pasal kereta rupanya.. hahaha.. terkena.. FAVE it..!!

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nikillas wrote on October 22, 2008 #12

Why does a car always have to be a female? Haha. And No, I wasn’t fooled, kantoi kat

“Drizzles cloud my sight, fondly she wiped.
Never will she miss, any single drop.”

Had to be a car :wink:

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NoktahHitam replied #1

i think every transport is referred to as ‘she’. Quite a big clue from the start.

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Zaza wrote on October 22, 2008 #13

Huh!.. betoi2 kena tipoo.. ingatkan ada “Da Vinci code” kat dlm tuh.. rupanya poem biasa jer..

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smaelz wrote on October 22, 2008 #14

That’ a good one! Cheers!

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shaxx wrote on October 22, 2008 #15

Jenny ni kereta Gen-2 ko ke? :D Poor Jenny… I never give any name to my car before. Sigh!

Damn good bro, aku tertipu so I faved you already! :lol: :lol:

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bongkersz wrote on October 22, 2008 #16

oh oh this is so cute~!! =) hehe. i wasnt thinking a woman, or anything perverted..i was thinking of a grandfather clock..and i lost the reason why after it’s revealed a car..erm..but i really like this! *^^* ehehe.

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NoktahHitam replied #1

Grand father clock?? Wow That’s too far ahead.

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Nani-chan wrote on October 22, 2008 #17

faved it! as the result being fooled by this poem. deym!

ps: my mind corrupted. have to admit it… :cry:
pss: great poem btw… you’re so good in literature :up:
psss: am technical person. literature is out of my league :sad:

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aeropama dot com wrote on October 22, 2008 #18

u, got a wicked, dark gift, eddy.haha.godspeed.

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NoktahHitam replied #1

You called me?

(am I not ‘your’ godspeed? Hahaha)

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kidd wrote on October 23, 2008 #19

:D i love it! u can write romance novel :P

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NoktahHitam replied #1

No thanks. I’m pretty much in love with my current job i.e. a crappy part time blogger.

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laila wrote on October 23, 2008 #20

blaghhh!!

(smacks my forehead)….

cheq kena tipuuu!!! hehe… it was a good one tho…
but after reading the last line i have heard that you have called ur car Jenny previously… hehe…

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shandye wrote on October 23, 2008 #21

Ha Ha. Good one. Have faved it. =) :up:

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Jed Yoong wrote on October 23, 2008 #22

nice2 entry. hahahahaa

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ubey wrote on October 29, 2008 #23

owh.. okes.. ingatkan lagu click5.. :razz:
:wink:

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bluesberry wrote on October 31, 2008 #24

Leave a comment, I won't bite ;)

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