I Miss You Jenny

Here we are, caught in this thunderous rain.
Rubbing each other, hoping it’ll ease the pain.

Drizzles cloud my sight, fondly she wiped.
Never will she miss, any single drop.

Bluntly we stared, sparingly asking of trust,
Silently we nodded and wrapped another.

Gently I squeezed, softly she grunts.
I wanted more, she suddenly roared.

“Slurrp” she sucked me in, I clutched her skin.
Don’t stop now, please blow me off.

Adrenaline racing, my toes entangled yours,
Away we head, to a lost less paradise.

Deeds or sins, good or bad, we never cared.
She said stop! I grew upset. We ran out of gas.

Yes, Jenny is my car. And you pervert thought I’d write a love making poem?

ps: Initially spelled Geni, but tak commercial la babe, hence Jenny.

pss: If you’ve been fooled, please Fave me!

psss: This was initially an essay, I guess I got caught up with poem. Whom to blame?

pssss: It’s about me stuck in traffic jam. Once I hit the open road, I jammed the pedal. I have my car and skills to trust on this slippery road.

Where to put this one??
I miss her.
Her cynic stare, piercing through anything she laid her eyes on.
Her deep sweet voice, slightly off pitched but enough to send me afloat.
Her pure innocent smile, as if begging me to ravage her.
Her carefree attitude, nothing can bring her down.
Most importantly, I miss the way she handles me.

NoktahHitam

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This Post Has 43 Comments

  1. wth?
    miahahahahaha
    speechless
    you go bro!

  2. You did mentionkan yang kamu pakai Jenny utk redah banjir.After that she got tarik pasal rosak..

  3. yes I did, on my previous blog.

  4. ok la..aku kena tipu…aku ingatkan ni response kepada SEO gaya PE…ruper nyer aku salah…faved it already…

    sengal plak aku tgk balik gambar aku amik ari tuh… xCukup banyak ruper nyer..CCCissss btol la..

  5. wakakakka… keta rupanya… hehehhehehehe πŸ˜†

    Bro… esok tengah hari atau awal skit dari tu ada something special kat blog saya… we want to try something for a change.. it would be very nice of you if you can take part and give you support… sincerity is the keyword..

    Adry @ http://www.adrysabry.com

  6. definitely! Bloggers to change the world!

  7. tertipu mesti kene fave it! care pancing best

  8. owh!good one.you caught me.keringΒ² kene tipu πŸ˜›

  9. oh,yes! you’ve got me. i’ve been fooled by the title. demn. hahahaha.

  10. lame, another pathetic way to urge ppl read it. Ding dong!

  11. Hi NH, been silently reading your blog (as usual). Very surprised to see my name as the title post although I knew you weren’t talking about me πŸ˜‰ Keep well. jenny

  12. i read dr bawah ke atas haha
    then reread.. bunyi nye sgt wrong!! LOL

  13. aku baca dari bawah ke atas.
    pastu baru aku baca balik.

    hoho.

  14. eh, tak perasan pulak Adila pun sama. Macam membahasa melayukan aje komen aku ni.

  15. haha.. aku dah agak.. mesti tricky poem nye la.. first2 ingat citer pasal kucing.. then.. citer pasal kereta rupanya.. hahaha.. terkena.. FAVE it..!!

  16. its either u r lame for being cheated or u r just plain lame. i dont see anything lame abt this post. idiot.

  17. ed, sorry for the “kurang sopanness”..

  18. Oh wel.. being overly popular has it’s weakness, haters πŸ˜₯

  19. You are free to slap any bitch you like, itu your own discretion.

  20. Why does a car always have to be a female? Haha. And No, I wasn’t fooled, kantoi kat

    “Drizzles cloud my sight, fondly she wiped.
    Never will she miss, any single drop.”

    Had to be a car πŸ˜‰

  21. apa yang best nya fave ih? sorry.. serious tak tahu.. πŸ˜›

  22. people vote for your writing, and you gain a lot more traffic from different grounds. πŸ˜†

  23. i think every transport is referred to as ‘she’. Quite a big clue from the start.

  24. Huh!.. betoi2 kena tipoo.. ingatkan ada “Da Vinci code” kat dlm tuh.. rupanya poem biasa jer..

  25. That’ a good one! Cheers!

  26. Jenny ni kereta Gen-2 ko ke? πŸ˜€ Poor Jenny… I never give any name to my car before. Sigh!

    Damn good bro, aku tertipu so I faved you already! πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

  27. haha kena tau ending dulu baru baca dari awal πŸ˜›

  28. yesss!! hi^5!! haha πŸ˜€

  29. hahahah xpe2
    sehati sejiwa cam tu la
    komen yg same~

    ngeee~ πŸ˜›

  30. oh oh this is so cute~!! =) hehe. i wasnt thinking a woman, or anything perverted..i was thinking of a grandfather clock..and i lost the reason why after it’s revealed a car..erm..but i really like this! *^^* ehehe.

  31. Grand father clock?? Wow That’s too far ahead.

  32. faved it! as the result being fooled by this poem. deym!

    ps: my mind corrupted. have to admit it… πŸ˜₯
    pss: great poem btw… you’re so good in literature :up:
    psss: am technical person. literature is out of my league πŸ™

  33. u, got a wicked, dark gift, eddy.haha.godspeed.

  34. You called me?

    (am I not ‘your’ godspeed? Hahaha)

  35. πŸ˜€ i love it! u can write romance novel πŸ˜›

  36. No thanks. I’m pretty much in love with my current job i.e. a crappy part time blogger.

  37. blaghhh!!

    (smacks my forehead)….

    cheq kena tipuuu!!! hehe… it was a good one tho…
    but after reading the last line i have heard that you have called ur car Jenny previously… hehe…

  38. Ha Ha. Good one. Have faved it. =) :up:

  39. nice2 entry. hahahahaa

  40. owh.. okes.. ingatkan lagu click5.. πŸ˜›
    πŸ˜‰

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