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He’s The Boss

That sexy girl is having lunch with the boss,
Nevermind lah, he’s the boss.

Did you know the boss often takes her to dinner?
Nevermind lah, he’s the boss.

Sometimes to movies,
Nevermind lah, he’s the boss.

I even saw them holding hands,
Nevermind lah, he’s the boss.

I think that’s the boss’s mistress,
Nevermind lah, he’s the boss.

So what are you going to do?
Nevermind lah, I’m his boss.

The above is an adaptation of my mini stories called ‘The Criminal Mind’. I originally planned on writing a novel or a drama script, but it’s just an idea, so I’ll leave it there. I should just stick to developing web :grin:

The Criminal Mind is an adventure of a homeless boy, who lived on the streets of Kuala Lumpur. Desperate for food and shelter, he mastered the art of stealing. Along the way, he met a few friends who share the same fate as his.

You can think of it as a prequel to Ocean 11, Ocean 12 & Ocean 13.

I didn’t want to continue writing because it might stimulate a real organized crime as it exposes many security loop holes in Malaysia.

Now that you’ve heard of it, please allow your mind to fantasize about the story as I’ve lost the document file :roll:

ps: The boy’s name is I.

 

There are 21 Comments for “He’s The Boss”

Dude, just continue with your life novel. Do something different won’t hurt a bit.

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Rizwan wrote on July 5, 2008 #1

maybe an online novel is good for this.
:smile: hehe
the art of stealing? cool :up:

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syuxx wrote on July 5, 2008 #2

eh.. continue writing lah dude.. :D aper potong stim cakap doc. dah hilang. (eh cakap pasal doc.. aku lupa nak intro ko member doc. tu.. kat fb haha)

ps: there’s a series ‘Criminal Minds’, very nice. i love it more to CSI. more human touch to the story/series – methods of investigation.

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NoktahHitam replied #1

Ade series ke? Shit man. Kene tuka title.

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bongkersz replied #1

ada dude.. go read at wikipedia.

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bongkersz wrote on July 5, 2008 #3

they boy is me
hehe

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NoktahHitam replied #1

The boy’s name is I, bukan Izzudin or Ismail. Just I.

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piju wrote on July 5, 2008 #4

LOL your worries about The Criminal Mind reminded of worried parents and teachers in Japan after the release of Deathnote – shops sell fake Deathnote notebooks so that people can scribble the name of the people that hate on it. Reminds me of black magic :shock:

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NoktahHitam replied #1

There’s one about stealing an ATM machine using a Pajero.

Provided you have the apparatus, everything can be done :cry:

Also to steal cars, Malaysian made car is way too easy :twisted:

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teddY replied #1

LOL! :lol: that’s the prelude to Ocean’s One I think, the Pajero thing. I’ve really never heard of people attempting to tow away ATM machines from banks elsewhere except for in Malaysia… how absurd.

Oh and I read on the papers a week ago about a jewelery shop in Penang, which is less than 50m away from a police station, got robbed and cleaned inside out within 3 minutes. Now I really must praise the efficiency of the robbers… if the police can do half as good, I’ll be content :twisted:

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teddY wrote on July 5, 2008 #5

Might want 2 the title,nanti org ingat criminal minds-the tv show la plak.Maybe I-11 ke…. :???:

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NoktahHitam replied #1

I have no idea that criminal mind tv exist. I guess that’s what you get for not watching tv.

Anyway the manuscript dah ilang pon. So what’s the point of changing name? :shock:

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M-I-N wrote on July 5, 2008 #6

so, bila nak bagi i baca your novel ni (???) :razz:

p.s : desperate for food and shelter (??) alaa.. cian. meh sini meh, umah i ada kosong ni.. :grin:

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NoktahHitam replied #1

bape sewa? singgit setengah sebulan ok la. :roll:

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AyUmi replied #1

kalau dia engineer i bagi free :roll:

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NoktahHitam replied #1

Oh? Jais datang karang…

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AyUmi replied #1

i’ll ask him to marry me laa. (kalau dia engineer la kan) hahahaha…

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AyUmi wrote on July 7, 2008 #7

ed, the novelist? must be kidding me right??

just kidding… nak baca kalau dah siap ok?

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NoktahHitam replied #1

Yeah I am. I’m batman. :arrow:

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mlle linie wrote on July 7, 2008 #8

I’ll take the above story as a good prologue for Criminal Minds. haha..just keep the original’s title.Maybe a lil observation on street kids should help.eheh :smile:

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NoktahHitam replied #1

I stopped writing it. No point in re-doing the same thing.

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Doyot wrote on July 7, 2008 #9

Leave a comment, I won't bite ;)

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