“A friend is one who has the same enemies as you have.”- Abraham Lincoln

He’s The Boss

That sexy girl is having lunch with the boss,
Nevermind lah, he’s the boss.

Did you know the boss often takes her to dinner?
Nevermind lah, he’s the boss.

Sometimes to movies,
Nevermind lah, he’s the boss.

I even saw them holding hands,
Nevermind lah, he’s the boss.

I think that’s the boss’s mistress,
Nevermind lah, he’s the boss.

So what are you going to do?
Nevermind lah, I’m his boss.

The above is an adaptation of my mini stories called ‘The Criminal Mind’. I originally planned on writing a novel or a drama script, but it’s just an idea, so I’ll leave it there. I should just stick to developing web :grin:

The Criminal Mind is an adventure of a homeless boy, who lived on the streets of Kuala Lumpur. Desperate for food and shelter, he mastered the art of stealing. Along the way, he met a few friends who share the same fate as his.

You can think of it as a prequel to Ocean 11, Ocean 12 & Ocean 13.

I didn’t want to continue writing because it might stimulate a real organized crime as it exposes many security loop holes in Malaysia.

Now that you’ve heard of it, please allow your mind to fantasize about the story as I’ve lost the document file :roll:

ps: The boy’s name is I.

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Rizwan wrote on
July 5, 2008 at 6:53 am

Dude, just continue with your life novel. Do something different won’t hurt a bit.

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syuxx wrote on
July 5, 2008 at 9:14 am

maybe an online novel is good for this.
:smile: hehe
the art of stealing? cool :up:
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bongkersz wrote on
July 5, 2008 at 2:46 pm

eh.. continue writing lah dude.. :D aper potong stim cakap doc. dah hilang. (eh cakap pasal doc.. aku lupa nak intro ko member doc. tu.. kat fb haha)

ps: there’s a series ‘Criminal Minds’, very nice. i love it more to CSI. more human touch to the story/series - methods of investigation.

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NoktahHitam replied on
July 5, 2008 at 11:23 pm

Ade series ke? Shit man. Kene tuka title.

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bongkersz replied on
July 7, 2008 at 9:17 am

ada dude.. go read at wikipedia.

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piju wrote on
July 5, 2008 at 2:59 pm

they boy is me
hehe

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NoktahHitam replied on
July 5, 2008 at 9:11 pm

The boy’s name is I, bukan Izzudin or Ismail. Just I.

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teddY wrote on
July 5, 2008 at 5:06 pm

LOL your worries about The Criminal Mind reminded of worried parents and teachers in Japan after the release of Deathnote - shops sell fake Deathnote notebooks so that people can scribble the name of the people that hate on it. Reminds me of black magic :shock:
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NoktahHitam replied on
July 5, 2008 at 11:25 pm

There’s one about stealing an ATM machine using a Pajero.

Provided you have the apparatus, everything can be done :cry:

Also to steal cars, Malaysian made car is way too easy :twisted:

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teddY replied on
July 6, 2008 at 7:15 pm

LOL! :lol: that’s the prelude to Ocean’s One I think, the Pajero thing. I’ve really never heard of people attempting to tow away ATM machines from banks elsewhere except for in Malaysia… how absurd.

Oh and I read on the papers a week ago about a jewelery shop in Penang, which is less than 50m away from a police station, got robbed and cleaned inside out within 3 minutes. Now I really must praise the efficiency of the robbers… if the police can do half as good, I’ll be content :twisted:
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M-I-N wrote on
July 5, 2008 at 10:40 pm

Might want 2 the title,nanti org ingat criminal minds-the tv show la plak.Maybe I-11 ke…. :???:

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NoktahHitam replied on
July 5, 2008 at 11:26 pm

I have no idea that criminal mind tv exist. I guess that’s what you get for not watching tv.

Anyway the manuscript dah ilang pon. So what’s the point of changing name? :shock:

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AyUmi wrote on
July 7, 2008 at 7:28 am

so, bila nak bagi i baca your novel ni (???) :razz:

p.s : desperate for food and shelter (??) alaa.. cian. meh sini meh, umah i ada kosong ni.. :grin:
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NoktahHitam replied on
July 7, 2008 at 12:04 pm

bape sewa? singgit setengah sebulan ok la. :roll:

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AyUmi replied on
July 7, 2008 at 12:50 pm

kalau dia engineer i bagi free :roll:
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NoktahHitam replied on
July 7, 2008 at 2:13 pm

Oh? Jais datang karang…

AyUmi replied on
July 7, 2008 at 3:14 pm

i’ll ask him to marry me laa. (kalau dia engineer la kan) hahahaha…

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mlle linie wrote on
July 7, 2008 at 11:26 am

ed, the novelist? must be kidding me right??

just kidding… nak baca kalau dah siap ok?

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NoktahHitam replied on
July 7, 2008 at 12:03 pm

Yeah I am. I’m batman. :arrow:

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Doyot wrote on
July 7, 2008 at 12:02 pm

I’ll take the above story as a good prologue for Criminal Minds. haha..just keep the original’s title.Maybe a lil observation on street kids should help.eheh :smile:

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NoktahHitam replied on
July 7, 2008 at 2:14 pm

I stopped writing it. No point in re-doing the same thing.

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