“Superman don't need no seat belt.”- Muhammad Ali

Doctor In The Rain

So there you are,
Trenched in your white coat,
Waiting by the roadside,
Faithfully waiting for the rain to subside.

So here I am,
A canned coffee in my hand,
Sitting side by side,
Eagerly waiting for the rain to subside.

So there you are,
An umbrella in your hand,
You could easily walk to the taxi stand,
Yet you waited for the sun that’ll never shine.

So here I am,
Walking back and forth,
Pondering my doubts and worries,
When is grandma going to finish?

So there you are,
Looking at the dark grey sky,
Asking the reasons why.

So here I am,
Gasping for every reasons why,
Why the hell am I so shy.

A car came and parked,
She ran and caught her ride,
I squirmed my eyes to improve my sight,
I saw her husband’s inside.

And so I smiled,
Answering my questions why,
I guess it’s one of those days,
One of those unheard Autumn goodbye.

Bye doctor!

ps: Wondering, is this poem season? mating season? cuz everyone seems to be writing one.

pss: I write poem much quicker than a normal post.

psss: Too many open houses to attend. Next will be mine, hopefully.

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sootsprite wrote on
October 25, 2008 at 5:39 am

yeah, one of those days
there is always tomorrow
you go edwin!
that’s a motivation :P
haha

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callister wrote on
October 25, 2008 at 5:55 am

yeah sume tulis poem..
bong pun tulis poem…

aku pun kena tulis gak ke untuk melengkapkan musim ni? :???:

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NoktahHitam replied on
October 25, 2008 at 6:09 am

bong jiwang babe.. aku bace meleleh air liur. hahaha

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callister replied on
October 25, 2008 at 7:42 am

huhu..aku baca poem ko ni,meleleh air mata.. :cry: :razz:

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bongkersz replied on
October 28, 2008 at 10:18 am

Aku cuma nak tunjuk aku ni ‘versatile’ blogger.. tulis apa karat pun boleh :P Hahahahaha! Mana jiwang nyer.. just relating a dream. (added some words, thanks to my years of efforts reading Literotica - Warning! minors don’t google! Ahaks!)

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laila wrote on
October 25, 2008 at 6:47 am

i tried composing some n faild miserably. jiwanglah korg
heheh but ive got two pantuns instead.

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nikillas wrote on
October 25, 2008 at 7:22 am

poem season kot.. sekarang semua org ingin menjadi sasterawan muda.. Mahu menggantikan A.Samad Said kah..??

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|1f34|-|1r3 wrote on
October 25, 2008 at 7:46 am

do you want me to ruin this beautiful post?
i don’t have the liberty to i suppose.

i have something in my mind to expose,
on this great poem as the reading goes.

you waited for a doctor that never came,
but you will get one when you’re walking with a cane.

guess i’ll finish this rambling,
or else the readers’ wrath come rumbling :lol:

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callister replied on
October 25, 2008 at 8:19 am

haha..jahatnye..

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t.a.t.a replied on
October 25, 2008 at 9:37 am

betul kata callister tu. ja-at nya ko ehh.
tak pe eddie, kuat kan semangat! buat dek je kat life4hire tu. meh aku debik dia sekali. debish!! hehehe

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nikillas replied on
October 25, 2008 at 8:21 am

pergh..!! ada bakat seh.. two thumbs up..!! :up: :up:

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smakuchan replied on
October 25, 2008 at 5:46 pm

hahahaha. good one.

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callister replied on
October 26, 2008 at 1:34 am

rajinnya wat poem untuk eddie..
untuk mcik xda ke?? :razz:

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|1f34|-|1r3 replied on
October 26, 2008 at 2:20 am

untuk mcik ade gak..tp kena simpan la…hehe :wink:

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NoktahHitam replied on
October 26, 2008 at 2:59 am

Nah, not enough to bring me down.

Being with a doc is really my fantasy,.. :razz: :razz:

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|1f34|-|1r3 replied on
October 26, 2008 at 7:09 am

haha bro..i know you won’t…but i thought being with a doctor is your mission in life…now it’s just a fantasy ? ko kawin…lepas tuh ko belikan baju doktor n patient la…. :grin:

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kidd wrote on
October 25, 2008 at 8:23 am

poem season?mating season? autumn usually brings melancholic breeze with it.

“you waited for a doctor that never came,
but you will get one when you’re walking with a cane”.

i guess chicks dig man sporting a cane,haha. get one, i say.

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|1f34|-|1r3 replied on
October 26, 2008 at 2:20 am

haha..sbnrnya aku terbayang citer house MD :razz:

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NoktahHitam replied on
October 26, 2008 at 3:00 am

House MD? Dude, aku nak beli motor sebijik mcm die. tgh kumpul duit since loan utk motor susah nak approve.

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kidd replied on
October 26, 2008 at 5:39 am

sikit pon aku tak teringatkankan House…now that u’ve mentioned it…baru teringat balik.haha.

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|1f34|-|1r3 replied on
October 26, 2008 at 7:08 am

haha…time aku tulis tuh aku terbayang house la..

@eddie : aku pon minat gak moto house tuh…smart duh..boleh naik smp ke tua pasal ada tempat nak selit tongkat..hehe :lol:

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bongkersz replied on
October 28, 2008 at 10:18 am

ada awek seorang dalam House MD very hot!!! :XO: :XO: :XO:

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|1f34|-|1r3 replied on
October 28, 2008 at 12:21 pm

damn..lari dr topik…yg mana satu? yg team asal house or team baru ? ker cuddie ?

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abdusfauzi wrote on
October 25, 2008 at 9:50 am

huhu… my teacher did told me, that july till the end of the year is the mating season, i guess, its true. hehehe.

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NoktahHitam replied on
October 26, 2008 at 3:00 am

Summer is mating season :shock: :arrow:

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nick wrote on
October 25, 2008 at 12:08 pm

Sajak untuk diri sendiri. Jgn sedih ye.

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NoktahHitam replied on
October 26, 2008 at 2:56 am

haha, tak sedih. Sedih is something I’m very capable of hiding :razz:

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yumi wrote on
October 25, 2008 at 2:09 pm

such a lovely poem… you good in playing with words… :up: :up:

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NoktahHitam replied on
October 26, 2008 at 2:57 am

thank you for your kind words :arrow:

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aman wrote on
October 25, 2008 at 4:50 pm

boleh jadi karyawan nie..hoho

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NoktahHitam replied on
October 26, 2008 at 2:56 am

I thought of writing a post, but it’d be much easier writing a poem.

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helldream wrote on
October 25, 2008 at 6:43 pm

wah. ada bakat terpendam ni.

good poem. :kiss:

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alone wrote on
October 26, 2008 at 3:14 am

i red twice.. then i could understand.. uhuh

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bongkersz wrote on
October 28, 2008 at 10:23 am

Very very nice poem dude. Damn you are good at this.. (sempat said it’s easy.. ‘bragger’ haha!) I think writing poems is better than writing a post.. as people are free to ’speculate’ and the imaginations run wild. A short moment Can be expressed beautifully in words by writing a poem, which if you put in a normal story form.. it may not sound interesting.

Well done! This post deserves a big big Clap! Please write more poems in future, probably Can have a special section dedicated for such posts next time.

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